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Got some constructive criticism?
2/7/13 by StodgyAyatollah
Working on this for a buddy of mine. He wants two 'hot ass' valkyries facing each other. Since the guy was talking about potentially getting it inked I want to make sure it doesn't have any glaring mistakes my bad eyes aren't noticing before I keep going. No need to point out the fact her hair looks like shit, It's just the general concept. Or that she has no nipples, since she will be clothed, sorta. I will be fixing her lips and hand and some minor touch ups to the coloring but aside from that do you notice anything that should be changed or have any suggestions? And not horribly important but she will be holding a spear.
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5 days ago
Wow, it's been a while. So do we get to see the finished product or what?
Also, would you care to draw me a profile picture?
2/8/13
Ok, I like the hair just add some volume at the top, the curves of her breast could be smoother, make her forearm a bit slimmer, her left thigh is smaller than the other and the knee curve should be lower, and her face is too pink compared to her body. I like the lips and the shading, keep them as they are. Her butt and her shoulder are perfect.
I hope I don't sound too strict! Let me know if I helped :)
Thanks, that's exactly what I was looking for. And thanks for favoriting my Nyarlathotep drawing I'm glad you like it.